2/5
Fantastic melody.
Really bad EQing. If you want to collab on this with me i could really help you out. Send me a PM
2/5
Fantastic melody.
Really bad EQing. If you want to collab on this with me i could really help you out. Send me a PM
Thank you.
I've been told my composition is really good.
Eqing/mixing is really my vice, especially where I'm mixing right now, I have to do it at low volumes, I think my mixes come out better when I listen through the monitors at highvolumes and not just headphones.
I might pm you about this:]
thanks again.
Ahoy
It needs to be EQ'd. Less reverb.
More base, distort the lead a bit, add a bassline.
aha, thanks. so glad you would even spend time on commenting on this garbage
Honestly, this was the first thing I ever made. It was made before I knew how to use the program at all XP
so glad people have actually listened to it ^_^ please check out some of my newer stuff
Very nice :D
I love it, it's uncommon to see songs with vocals on newgrounds. Well executed ^^
still experimenting with using vocals, it's becoming easier, the vocals aren't perfectly on beat at some parts but it'll be worked on... and I must say mastering this track is taking forever... :(
Thanks for the kind words :)
-shoephly
Melody
It's very fresh and very interesting. I really like what you did here :D
Nice work
Thanks!
Great
Rating starts at 5, and i show the math with each point.
At the beginning i feel that the piano sound was a bit empty. I think you should have made it a bit more rich but still not bad. -1
When the the main synth notes start to stutter i really really enjoy the effect that it gives. It feels like a burst of energy +1
The song doesn't feel repetitive at all +1
You cover a large range of octaves and the sound feels full and rich. +1
I find the volume of the bass and the kick to be a bit low, and that the kick is a bit to quiet. -1
It sounds really layered, and it really contributes to the overall sound +1
The intro is really powerful +1
The pads were really well used +1
Over all i have to rate this a 7/10 it's very well done.
I just with the kick was loud. Keep up the good work adam!
That adds up to nine you silly goose! :D
Amazing
I love adam, gotta love this :D
Haha right on! Anyone who loves dangoman is a friend on mine. :)
Nicework
I love how this came togehter. I love having the honor of hearing these songs being made and adding my input ^^ Great job!
Thanks for the help!
Nice work
I enjoyed doing this collab with you. ^^
I had a lot of fun too!
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